資訊標(biāo)題：2018資陽(yáng)雁江區(qū)sat報(bào)班哪個(gè)好

資陽(yáng)雁江區(qū)sat是資陽(yáng)雁江區(qū)sat培訓(xùn)學(xué)校的重點(diǎn)專業(yè)，資陽(yáng)市知名的sat培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)，教育培訓(xùn)知名品牌，資陽(yáng)雁江區(qū)sat培訓(xùn)學(xué)校師資力量雄厚，全國(guó)各大城市均設(shè)有分校，學(xué)校歡迎你的加入。

資陽(yáng)雁江區(qū)sat培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布資陽(yáng)市雁江區(qū),簡(jiǎn)陽(yáng)市,安岳縣,樂至縣等地,是資陽(yáng)市極具影響力的sat培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。

如果一個(gè)考生的語(yǔ)言能力強(qiáng)，想象力豐富，大可把整個(gè)第二頁(yè)寫滿。

為節(jié)約時(shí)間，這些考試規(guī)則類的東西都要立即跳過，直接看題審題。

接著作者說自己的經(jīng)歷能證明人們可以找到快樂并在此基礎(chǔ)上繼續(xù)尋找更大的快樂。

但是泰坦尼克在一開始就是很boring的，有30分鐘就在那講打撈沉船的細(xì)節(jié)，在觀眾快不能忍受的時(shí)候，導(dǎo)演給Rose的眼睛一個(gè)大大的特寫，從那蔚藍(lán)的眼睛中霎時(shí)跳出了泰坦尼克號(hào)郵輪，這個(gè)經(jīng)典的愛情故事才算是正式開始了。

當(dāng)然，這對(duì)考生的知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)要求就很高了，考生沒有足夠的知識(shí)面，對(duì)例子本身缺少了解，是很難寫到一定的長(zhǎng)度的。

如果這樣開始一篇文章，實(shí)在過于直接，文章的嚼勁就不足了。

displays developing facility in the use of language, but sometimes uses weak vocabulary or inappropriate word choicelems in sentence structure

不妨說點(diǎn)冠冕堂皇的話來充實(shí)第一段的內(nèi)容，然后逐步繞到中心點(diǎn)上，擺明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

如果你認(rèn)為確實(shí)有永遠(yuǎn)的英雄，那么就要舉出具體的例子，那個(gè)英雄為什么是永恒的；如果你認(rèn)為沒有永恒的英雄，也要舉出具體例子，來證明永恒的英雄確實(shí)不存在。

最后，作者的語(yǔ)法基礎(chǔ)很扎實(shí)，通篇沒有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（當(dāng)然，即使有點(diǎn)小的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤也不會(huì)影響該篇作文獲得滿分），而且展示了一定的遣詞造句能力。

你的例子舉得好不好，和論點(diǎn)是否密切相關(guān)，在很大程度上決定了作文的成敗。

SCORE OF 4

下面我們介紹一篇獲得滿分的敘述形式的文章： Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.No one is contented in this world, I believe. There is always something left to desire, and the last thing longed for always seems the most necessary to happiness. Marie Corelli, A Romance of Two Worlds Assignment: Do you think that people are capable of finding happiness or are they always searching for something beyond what they have? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation. 優(yōu)秀范文： Happiness means different things to different people. My sister is happiest when she performs onstage in a play. My best friend is happiest when he is pitching a perfect game on the baseball field. People find happiness in all sorts of ways, but that doesn't mean they stop searching for something more. Finding happiness and continuing to pursue other goals are not mutually exclusive propositions. Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivate you, as I've learned from my own experience. When I was in middle school, my favourite class was art and I was disappointed that the class period was so short and only twice a week. Although I was happy during those times, I really missed art during the rest of the week. However, knowing that art class was approaching helped motivate me to pay attention in the rest of my classes because I knew that my "reward" would soon follow. Once we were in the art room and I was immersed in painting or sculpting or drawing, I found incredible happiness in the creative process and carried this feeling with me throughout the remainder of the day, yet I wasn't fully satisfied with this small amount of exposure and I wanted more. I did appreciate the happiness I had, but at the same time I was looking something beyond that. So I begged my parents to let me take art classes after school and on the weekend, I managed to convince them I'd be happier if I could have this additional creative time. Taking more and different art classes outside of school exposed me to a variety of different techniques and media that I never had time to explore in school, like metal-working, wood-carving and print-making. I grew even more enthusiastic about the visual arts and found even more happiness than I could have imagined thanks to these additional classes. By wanting something more, I was able to find additional contentment and inspiration and I truly was happy with the results. Yet I didn't stop reaching for other goals. I really wanted to have my artwork displayed for the public, so I worked very hard for several years to develop a portfolioand I achieved my goal last year with my first solo show at a local gallery. This success gave me much happiness, and I'm already planning additional shows. Being content with my art makes me happy on a regular basis, but this doesn't keep me from wanting something more at the same time. For me, striving for additional goals adds to my happiness, so I don't see the two actions as contradictory at all. Instead, searching for something beyond what you have can help you to appreciate and enhance whatever it is that makes you truly happy. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】 這個(gè)作文題問的是，人們能否尋找到快樂，或人們是否總不滿足于眼前的快樂？ 在第一段，作者首先說明對(duì)不同的人來說，快樂意味著不同的內(nèi)容，人們可以找到快樂，但不會(huì)就此停止。

SCORE OF 5

Success is achievement of something desired, planned, or attempted. However, just because an endeavour was unsuccessful does not mean it is without value. The failed Columbia mission and the Vietnam War are two such examples.

● SAT作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求

is free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics

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